Ok, guys, this is the dumbest thing I can do but I am a very critical person about my writings and it gets to me and this is very disappointing but- I AM REWRITING IT FOR THE THIRD TIME I KNOW I KNOW it's STUPID ITS DISSAPOINTING BUT Y/n ISNT AS BAD I DONT THINK- I MEAN LIKE- IT SHOULD GO FASTER FOR UPDATES I ONLY STOP AT 2000 WORDS NOW SO THATS GREAT BUT I HAVE SCHOOL TOMMOROW AND I WONT BE ABLE TO RE WRITE THE SECOND PART YET BUT IN MY EYES IT LOOKS BETTER THAN BEFORE ITS PROB TRASH BUT I FEEL LIKE Y/N IS MORE OF A FAT MOOD I THINK NOT MUCH OF A PICK ME IDK I TRY NOT TO DO ALOT OF PET PEVES WITH Y/N IF YOH KNOW WHAT I MEAN NOW THERE STAYING WITH DILUC FOR THE MEAN TIME I RECOMEND CHECKING IT OUT I HOPE I REALLY HOPE ITS BETTER THAN BEFORE