Lilas-17

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laS3VDAA

@Lilas-17 thanks for your thoughts, i am not sure and a bit busy nowadays
            I hope asap.
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Lilas-17

@Lilas-17 do u know when next part would be up ?
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Lilas-17

@Lilas-17 yes I did it was good but I wish it's longer
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Lilas-17

NC?

laS3VDAA

@Lilas-17  thankyou
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Lilas-17

@laS3VDAA omg I hope you and your family are alright
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laS3VDAA

@Lilas-17 ok we are in the middle of the war now, I'll post it soon.
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Lilas-17

Hey when will you post the first chapter .

laS3VDAA

@Lilas-17 very soon
            I was a bit busy, sorry.
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Lilas-17

@Lilas-17 I mean yea the next Charter?
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laS3VDAA

@Lilas-17 you mean the next chapter?
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GaylaBer

Hi. So. I read the first part of your story. It’s really good. Very catching. I was interested in who was who and who the son actually is! 
          
          I’m guessing that English isn’t your first language, and that’s totally okay! There were a few spelling and grammar errors that absolutely do not take away from the story AT ALL. 
          
          I’m really looking forward to reading more.

laS3VDAA

@GaylaBer hi, i provided the next part, i will be glad if you check it out and leave your comments  .
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GaylaBer

You’re doing fine!  Like I said, it didn’t take away from the story at all!
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laS3VDAA

@GaylaBer
             wow, thank you for your thoughts. i will provide the next part asap, and yes, english isn't my first language, so i will be more careful next time to avoid grammar.
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EnteaJ

Hey thanks for reading my story hope your enjoying ❤

EnteaJ

@EnteaJ ok I will check it out ☺️
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laS3VDAA

@EnteaJ this is in my profile in published story sections
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laS3VDAA

https://www.wattpad.com/story/392653693?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=amirS3VDAA
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