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ssdrangonpranger1
Hi, is it okay if I get your your opinion on my story bound by obsessions ? Is that okay with you
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la_na_myers
@ssdrangonpranger1 heyy so i read the first chapter. And like from a reader's pov, it kinda felt like you jumped straight into the middle of the book instead of the beginning. Idk if you meant for it to be like that. But having an introduction or an explanation kinda thing in the first chap would be nice. Just basic info. Or a prologue would be nice. The writing is good. I'll read the rest of the book and share my opinion ❤
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