la_na_myers

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ssdrangonpranger1

Hi, is it okay if I get your your opinion on my story bound by obsessions ? Is that okay with you

la_na_myers

@ssdrangonpranger1 did you have time to check out my story btw?
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la_na_myers

@ssdrangonpranger1 heyy so i read the first chapter. And like from a reader's pov, it kinda felt like you jumped straight into the middle of the book instead of the beginning. Idk if you meant for it to be like that. But having an introduction or an explanation kinda thing in the first chap would be nice. Just basic info. Or a prologue would be nice. The writing is good. I'll read the rest of the book and share my opinion ❤
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la_na_myers

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2 ⭐⭐ 
          The fmc, colette, was so fucking annoying. I hated her with all my heart. She went through hell and back but she was self sacrificial that it was just stupid. The plot got lowkey crazy towards the end not even gonna lie. Throughout the story, everyone seemed to forget that werewolves can easily overpower humans. It annoyed the fuck out of me, and everyone who read the book. Miscommunication at its peak too. Overall, I would not recommend it
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/2149224

la_na_myers

Just finished reading back to willow by @melvauthor  . Amazing book, great writing, really good characters. Dylan, the little kid, stole everyone's hearts. 
          It's a second chance romance, with a baby. Follows two childhood best friends(and lovers), willow and liam. Their past and their future. Willow, who is a victim of rape is disowned by her parents when she gets pregnant at 16. She leaves town to stay with her nana without saying anything to Liam. Liam, at 22, is still not over her or her sudden disappearance when they meet again. There's friendship, love, parental love, brotherly love, cute little, protective dylan, innocent love between two little kids. There's drama, jealousy, the green eyed monster that we all love. There's a lot of sadness and pain and anger. There's also a lot of happiness. 
          A great read, absolutely recommend this