lady_hanji_zoe

Bloop, bloop....

CrystalWave56

I'm sorry but in your book thanks for the memory, you basically just spoiled the whole thing. I don't even have to read the story to know how it ends and what happens. In future works try to focus more on 1. what readers are most likley interested in 2. Putting more time into your story instead of the description. I'm not trying to be mean, just trying to help. So if you follow those then maybe you will have more followers.

cheesecakeg1rl

@CrystalWave56 oh and she doesn't own this account anymore
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cheesecakeg1rl

@CrystalWave56 wow... You are right! I think it's a bit too fast too. I said to myself
            "Well that escalated quickly..."
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