Joanna Lorraine

Your story is really good JoAnna!! :)

You're welcome. You're stories are great! 
          

Thank you so much for the fan! I hope you enjoy the stories!

You're really welcome for fanning and I do enjoy reading the stories that you guys have(: 

Thank you so much for fanning :D

@ladykita1988 you should deffinatly, send me your story
          

You're welcome(: 
          

@ladykita1988 thank ya
          

ohkay, you need to capotalize your "i" and the begining of your sentences. and over all its good. I think this could progress .
          

 looked around at the grey, gloomy room. I have grown used to this place, grown used to the new guy that used to be my best friend. I could remember ho-
          
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          speak of the devil and he shall appear, i suppose. I turned to look into the cold blue eyes of my old best friend, Jack. I still would look back and remember how he would smile and his eyes would light up. I didn't know back then that he was just trying to get me to trust him, trust him so that he could find out my true identity. I was a quiet girl and i didn't talk to anyone but Jack. He used me and now i have no one. I hate him, now, with a passsion. 
          
          I suddenly remembered his one rule, among the others. I wasn't supposed to look him in the eyes. SO i looked down. He said that when i looked him in the eyes, he could see my weakness' and that only ticked him off more. I wasn't supposed to be weak, i was supposed to be cold, and strong like him. 
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          this is where i got stuck... what do u think?