Reanni Wp

Hi, can you critique mine? Entitled Will Never Be, it is a BxB story. I just want to consider reader's preference. Thank you ✨
          
           "Will Never Be | BXB" by HaresPratum on Wattpad
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/276169077?utm_source=android&utm_medium=co.easy4u.writer&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=HaresPratum&wp_originator=c%2FS5QwgmrP7VOI1xdVNK6mXs0Xr4Ri3ovqguVTPVR50ip6DDtS%2Bm%2F7fRoa58qyCcEDcV90A8p%2FjFFmogiml4Ab7MLl4iMwOy%2B5w4DriggflRXxwZUISaixr9UYcCYunP