Kidnapped- by THEM?!?! Review:
Kidnapped- by THEM?!?! (Hereon out called “Kidnapped”) is the story of a girl and her trip to a One Direction concert. However, The title doesn’t seem to fit as nothing has happened yet. I advise the author to take this book off until more chapters can be written. Along with that, almost all of the beginning needs to be carefully revised. Every character has little to no dialogue, and seems to be talking from a script. Characters should have more emotion, more life to them. For example, when the main characters friend gets 2 ticket to a one direction concert, she is yelling and bouncing off the walls. However, to convey this to the reader, the author makes all her dialogue in caps. This is hard to read, and so I skipped over most of it. However, the author does seem to want the characters to stand out and be different, so points for trying. Other than that most of the plotline has holes in it, and should be organised and resubmitted. This could definitely make an interesting read if these changes are made appropriately.
Final Rating: 2