laihasnoenergy

sorry for the wait yall, it’s been a hwhile ik but my life is stressful af and i overwrite so i had to cut some things down, it was a mess! anyway!! 
          	
          	a new chapter of divine intervention is out!!! dollie and miguel meet, yall see inside of her mind a little more (you might not like her but that’s my baby! she gon get right eventually!)

laihasnoenergy

sorry for the wait yall, it’s been a hwhile ik but my life is stressful af and i overwrite so i had to cut some things down, it was a mess! anyway!! 
          
          a new chapter of divine intervention is out!!! dollie and miguel meet, yall see inside of her mind a little more (you might not like her but that’s my baby! she gon get right eventually!)

laihasnoenergy

i need to rewrite this chapter because i have a new idea on how miguel and dahlia should meet but that would mean they wouldn’t meet until chapter two because there’s an important scene that reveals a lot about her character in the chapter i’m currently writing- oh brother el oh el

laihasnoenergy

okay. so i’ve decided that i’m gonna post this cobra kai book that has been looming in my drafts for multiple months if not years so let me give yall some info as a sales pitch:
          
          the main character is dahlia ‘dollie’ aldera, she’s a us national karate champion, though she is currently retired for reasons she’s in therapy for and she lives with her grandma, an extremely wealthy fashion designer/socialite who has a very strange relationship with not only her on and off ex-husband, but his best friend and their business (wow i wonder who her grandpa is). anyway, back to therapy. her therapist gives her an assignment to make a friend and teach them something since he realizes she’s a recluse who purposefully avoids social interaction aside from shopping (sales associates only) and ballet (which she does 1 on 1)
          
          she then meets miguel diaz when her grandmother stops at one of her first boutiques, which is across the street from the strip mall where cobra kai dojo is. she then picks him and uses him for her assignment and the chain reaction of chaos that is the show cobra kai plays out around my many plots
          
          dahlia’s fc: sofia bryant
          main love interest: miguel diaz
          second love interest: mattheo pierson (oc)
          past love interest: eli moskowitz (two-sided unrequited love unfortunately)
          
          sooo what do we think?? publish? burn? kill it with fire? also this is a very vague explanation

laihasnoenergy

also she’s very much a mean girl, she might not have friends but this bitch is on alison di’laurentis type of timing, she’s not good people at first
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angiee019_

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          Thank you so much for giving me your time.