lalaland3332

Please give me suggestions on the next chapter, and comment below thank you~ https://www.wattpad.com/story/88914852

SkylerGuilbert

@lalaland3332 , I told you to add more detail than the one on Google Docs for school, right? Also, use my editing marks for When They All Sink Down
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lalaland3332

Hey your welcome your a really good writer
          

lalaland3332

Actually I stated the sex scene  with you and brendan for the second chapter but im not finished yet so hold on!
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SkylerGuilbert

@lalaland3332 don't forget to put up the other one we are working on
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