I don't usually comment on any works in Wattpad, usually opting to show my support by liking every single chapter that I like, but I really wanted to write this mini review of your work so far because I have really enjoyed reading your SBR story!
First of, congratulations on having such nice and consistent writing style at such a young age. It's not everyday you come across writers who can post such long and detailed chapters, much less when they are still young enough to be going to school. I'm impressed! I read through your book very quickly and I must admit it was impossible to put down and reaching the end and having to wait for new updates feels like torture. In the good sense, of course.
Your writing is compelling, balancing scenes that are both action packed and extremely descriptive. You have proved that you are capable of discreetly incorporating foreshadowing in many different scenes and -unlike in many other stories where those threads are just there for filler and don't lead to any actual plot related points- you have used every single one of them and you have used them well (at least the ones I could find, there could still be more hidden in there and I'll happily reread it all in search of more secret foreshadowing).