Hello,
I am writing a slow burn story that explores all the aspects of love, fearing to love, the pain and trust. A dramatic yet passionate story about two people who are différents.
Please give me some feedback and vote if you like it !
(Ps : English is not my native language so excuse my grammar mistakes) !
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Chapter 7 of untwined by love posted. If someone can give me a feedback (pace, tmi ?) what should I improve ?View all Conversations
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