You could have made it like Em was talking to her kid, of course from Gina, and now she's a cop, while Gina's a teacher, and they could of moved, gotten Married, and Em ONLY turned her after she asked her to, either on their honeymoon, or because she had an accident that almost took her life and she did it to save her? But great story, I just didn't enjoy the swear words that were used, ok I'm done giving you ideas, because your the author ☺️
And even though your probably already finished with this story and on to other things, I can hope that you will like my ideas and feel like writing.....
