landofmists

It’s my birthdayyy omg it came so fast!

T912007

@landofmists happy birthday :)
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landofmists

This last assignment is dragging but I miss reading and writing. I just can’t wait to come back to it soon. 

StormRider72

@landofmists Lol, good luck with your assignment! 
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landofmists

@StormRider72 aww thank you so much! I’ve missed your comments lol 
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StormRider72

@landofmists I can't wait for you to come back to it! I miss reading your story :)
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landofmists

Hi guys! 
          I have this idea for a book and I need some help. It’s based around a murder and my characters are finding out what happened as well as finding out who they are. I have two protagonists relating to the story in their own ways but I’m struggling on what point of view I should do it in. 
          If I lead the story with only one protagonists POV, half the story will be missing, and if I do both protagonists, it would reveal too much and it wouldn’t be as mysterious as I want it to be, because I want to keep one of the protagonists life a secret (kind of). Let me know your thoughts please! 

StormRider72

@landofmists Of course! I know how that feels... Good luck though, I hope you find the right one! :)
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landofmists

@StormRider72 Yeahh I’ve been looking into third person POVs. It’s hard picking between the types rn but I’m gonna explore some more! Thank youu :) 
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StormRider72

@landofmists If you wanted you could do it in first person and then switch between both of there POVS in different chapters, like do one in one of the persons POVS and then do another in the others maybe? Also, it might help if you do third-person omniscient, I've written in that I think and looking up the meaning of it, it might be what you want. Then you can like choose who's point of view you want the reader to be in when you want it, then you might be able to keep things more of a secret and still get a lot between both characters. I hope this helped or gave you some ideas!
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landofmists

I’ve just realised that I’m finishing uni in like 6 weeks and I need to put all my time into my last assignments, so there will be no updates until early may! 

StormRider72

@landofmists Aww... Oh well. I hope you do well with your assignments!
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landofmists

@T912007 thank youu☺️ 
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