Hey, if you could, I would love it if you could check out one or two of my books... One of them is called Demon's Eye. I have been working on that one for a while and will understand if you have more negative comments on that one- as I was quite the beginner when I started it.
However, I'd also appreciate it if you take a look at Stories, another book of mine. This one I had only gotten 1 chapter through, and I am playing around with concepts. I was wondering if I should bother to keep going or if I should just stop. I like it so far, but it might need more improvement.
If you could help I would greatly appreciate it! :)