lauren_4567

@slutxhoran okay thank you! Thanks for the tip, I guess i never really thought about backround stories! Oops but i will definitely include that:D

randomlydeep

@lauren_cuthbertson you're so very welcome! its quite easy. just come up with a background to her, she must have a reason! disease? bad expierence with family? bullied? it doesn't matter! you're choice, babe! don't be afraid to embrace it!!
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lauren_4567

@slutxhoran okay thank you! Thanks for the tip, I guess i never really thought about backround stories! Oops but i will definitely include that:D

randomlydeep

@lauren_cuthbertson you're so very welcome! its quite easy. just come up with a background to her, she must have a reason! disease? bad expierence with family? bullied? it doesn't matter! you're choice, babe! don't be afraid to embrace it!!
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randomlydeep

in your story, 'killer', you don't do a very great job of explaining and giving details too why she kills...I love your book tho! I just don't get why you didn't include the details. maybe when writing your next chapter/part, you could include a little 4-1-1 on the main character :) just a thought!