CoolioCumbucket

I enjoy the story even though it borderlines a little cliché not with the concept in genral but at the beginning of the first chapter or so. I am not myself a good writer but im gonna keep it 100 with you so you can get better. It takes a lot of courage to put yourself out there and I did take an intrest in the story so you did succeed in capturing my attention. I hope I was helpful and I am gonna leave some comments.  Good job love I will continue to read 

CoolioCumbucket

Your welcome and I am excited for it 
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laurenmcnair

It means a lot and I appreciate this I know it seems cliche but I got a really big twist I'm gonna put in it so I hope it saves it 
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