New idea for a short story :D Any comments/critiques?
Sage Bernstrum has always been gifted whether it’s in mathematics or even drawing. He’s a hot high school boy, the kind all the girls crush on and all the sluts sleep on. Yes, Sage is perfect—or about as close to it as he wants. It’s just been recently that Sage’s been having some… trouble. In his dreams, he meets her. Her name is Delaney and she is so great—so fantasy-perfect that Sage can’t seem to get any joy out of reality. Now, meet the real Delaney Bishop, the clumsiest girl in the world. In her small hometown of Snoqualmie, she’s broken seven bones, tripped over a hundred times, and her most recent accident—falling off of a roof and landing herself in a coma.
If I can only see you in my dreams; let me sleep forever