laydybug-1456

@laydybug-1456 it's good but you don't need to make the time skip. You do have a good plot buuut to me it wasn't really interesting. 
            
            I'm not really a professional writer so take my stuff lightly!

@laydybug-1456 okay I will 

@McKaylaHilton5 I updated one of my stories, let me know what you think about it! 

@McKaylaHilton5 hey, read 'I'm sorry!' By me, plz

@McKaylaHilton5 sure

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