lazilyellow

if anyone wants constructive criticism, lemme know (;

grayeon

Hey do you mind checking out my book "the End game?"  ♡♡ Thank you!!!
          
          
          "Not every one gets to have a life they want. " She said. "To make their wish come true someone has to pay a heavy price."
           #1 in fiction 2020
          
          After Riana loses her sister and get hate from her mother she loses a reason to live and she loathes her life. She feels there is nothing better she can do than ending her life. She jumps off a building but surprisingly she is magically stopped.
          
           This stranger offers her a unbelievable choice which could destroy or remake her life into what she wants. But again nothing comes for free. She is asked to play a Game in which the prize is anything she wants. She has to win the game to earn it.
          
          Game is not so simple as she thought as it's far more dangerous than just losing a life. She finds out its more than a game. Somethings happens beyond the game and behind the curtains which is forbidden and venomous.
          
          This is a bet on her life. 
          Die or live
          
          
           "For a Wish, a New begining and a Dead end"

CrazyMeisie

Thank you so much for the love you've shown The Fate of a Romancer! ❤❤❤❤❤

CrazyMeisie

@lazilyellow
            Thank you so much!
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lazilyellow

i really like it! i'd read the completed story of it, i love the characters you create in your works they're realistic, relatable, and can be pretty humorous. you're a very talented writer (:
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