Hey there!
First of all, I sincerely apologize if this message causes any inconvenience or spams up your message board. I was only hoping for your help! I'm currently working on a book titled "The Ivory Knight", and I was hoping you had a wee bit of time to take a peek. However, it's still in the works, and I would absolutely LOVE to hear what you think of it!
Here's the link, if you're interested:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/19355716-the-ivory-knight
If you do decide to check it out, I'd like to hear what feedback or criticism you have in the comments, and I wouldn't say no to a vote either ;)
Sorry for the shameless self promotion! I honestly appreciate your time and effort more than you could ever know. In fact, if I can help you out in any way (ex. check out your story and provide my thoughts, make you a cover, etc.) just private message me and let me know! I'd be happy to help in any way I can :)
Thank you so much!
-Anyi