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i hate when in stories, people shorten character’s names or last names, like when Murphy is shortened to Murph, or Monty is turned to Mont [YOU ONLY NEED TO ADD ONE DAMNED LETTER ‘Y’ IS IT THAT HARD?] or Jasper — Jasp? Octavia — Oct? wtf? where did these come from? they need to go back from wherever the hell they came from. 
          	YOU CANNOT SHORTEN ROAN TO RO. NO. NO. NO.
          	btw if you thought this was an update on my book.. welp, sorry.. although im working on a chapter that will be up soon.

lcngstoryshort

i hate when in stories, people shorten character’s names or last names, like when Murphy is shortened to Murph, or Monty is turned to Mont [YOU ONLY NEED TO ADD ONE DAMNED LETTER ‘Y’ IS IT THAT HARD?] or Jasper — Jasp? Octavia — Oct? wtf? where did these come from? they need to go back from wherever the hell they came from. 
          YOU CANNOT SHORTEN ROAN TO RO. NO. NO. NO.
          btw if you thought this was an update on my book.. welp, sorry.. although im working on a chapter that will be up soon.

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I came to a conclusion that Jasper Jordan was one of the very weak characters. He couldn't bare with the fact that he lost his loved one, i get it, but didn't everyone lose someone they loved once? Clarke lost her father, her best friend Wells, her lover Finn/Lexa and still managed to stay sane and kind and a beautiful human she is. Octavia lost Lincoln. The love they had, was one of the strongest relationships. She didn't kill herself, she stayed sane. She remembered him and honoured him gracefully (by letting all clans share the bunker). Monty had to kill HIS OWN MOTHER, still stayed sane. He didn't let Harper die, he fought for her. She allowed him to save her. 
          Don't even get me started on Raven Fucking Reyes, because she is a queen. No one has been through as much damage as her, she still didn't give up and got the team to the damned space. I'm not even gonna talk about her troubles and tortures, because my friends, she is a true hero. She said no to death in the face. Murphy has been through a lot of shit and still got over everything. And you're telling me that Jasper couldn't bare with Maya's death? I'm sorry is earth too evil? Well other character know much more about it than Jasper does. I used to be so sad about his death because he was one of my fav characters but not i don't even understand him. Everyone has to move on, killing yourself isn't an option. Jasper was weak. Clarke, Bellamy, Octavia, Raven, Monty, Harper, Miller, Kane, Abby (etc etc) were not. if you read this fully, thank you, i just felt like i had to say it.

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I want to write another book, after I’m done with ,,opposites attract’’, so what should I wrote about? Descendants again? Maybe an OC included... Idk idk..

feistyprincess1

@doveslight Whatever you write, it's going to be amazing. If you feel like doing descendants again, go for it!
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