lcsersclvb

can ppl pls go read my mike fic ❤️❤️❤️

lcsersclvb

some tips on how to make more descriptive paragraphs and chapter pls, really needed x

lcsersclvb

@wid-ows thank you so much!!!! 
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starkphobic

like here’s something from mine: Molly's vision seemed to lessen as she watched the dying trees roll by accompanied with an eerie yet almost comforting haze. Fall had always been the girl's favorite season, but she's never seen it so uninteresting with every shade of brown and tan you could imagine. Just another reason to hate Hawkins. 
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starkphobic

@lcsersclvb hii! i struggle with this too, sometimes it helps me to google descriptive words or synonyms to set the scene correctly. also you can choose paragraphs in between dialogue as a chance to describe the current scene or people talking if that makes sense 
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lcsersclvb

— omg guys i’m drinking a new smoothie and i’m so excited about it #smoothiesaretheonlythingkeepingmegoing

lcsersclvb

@Mandyhascandy YES. It’s guava, apple and pineapple  
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Mandy-bo-bandy

@hpg33k is it a good smoothie?
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