dazedonuts
Heeyyy,
I was wondering if you could check out my short story Ice cream Boy, if you can't or don't want to that's fine too. Thank you in advance♡♡♡
P.S. your profile photo is me when someone tries to take a bite out of my pizza lmaoo
Cheers♡
- dee
ldoughnuts
I read your story and it's very good the description is amazing and the only thing you could improve on is maybe include a bit more about the characters and maybe do a Noah Pov so that the readers can see his first encounter with jocelyn in his point of view