I understand, Ijust got pissed off with the setting and relationships because if a plot strays from the original plan, then I dub it as a work in progress. I only truly enjoy stories that are accurate with the actual situations, time limit, the character relationships, ect.
You did pretty good got a 14 year old though, I must admit.
It was my pleasure reading, and voting. Though I am sorry for my snarky feedback..