Hi dear
How are you?
You asked any idea or suggestion so here I am.
Sarbuland loved Bano
Rabiya married Mudassir
In the drama, both were loyal to their partners and were green flags
But the fact that Bano was Sarbuland's first love and as everyone knows men don't forget their first love, there was that edit on YouTube featuring the scene from episode 34 where he broke down in Rabiya's arm with 'Meri Bano'... No matter what, a girl can't bear that, her man crying for another woman in her arms...
On the other side, Sarbuland keeps calling Rabiya, Zarmala even after the truth came out. The fact that she was married to Mudassir before him, he was her first whether she loves him or not.. It's also disturbing for him, men are very territorial, no matter how good he is the thought that someone else touch his woman before do cross his mind.. I know it's a bit childish, somewhat cheap to think like that.. Infact very wrong because these things doesn't matter but still it hurts, whether anyone accepts it or not, tries to avoid it, they didn't want this but still fell for each other deep and harder... Yet their past haunt them or hurt them in ways they can't explain... Your emotional expression of characters is so good that I want you to write a story like they weren't each other's first but last... I don't know but this fact is disturbing me in ways I can't explain.. What's your thoughts on this?