Nyxwrites_

I genuinely think your book has a lot of potential, and the overall idea is really interesting. I just feel like some parts move a bit too fast, so certain moments don’t fully have time to develop naturally. I think slowing the pacing down a little and letting scenes breathe more could make the emotions and relationships feel even stronger because the story itself is good <3
          
          And I’m only saying this because I’ve honestly read so many books in this genre—both the really amazing ones and the genuinely terrible ones.

followmyaesthetic

I agree the story and concept is truly unique and good, I am really into it and so interested to see what more is there to come, do continue writing such stories deserve to be read
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leave_mia_alone2

Heyy
            Thank you so much. I really appreciate you giving me advice. This is my first book and I’m really happy to find that you loved it. I will try my best to improve it as much as I can.
            
            Thank you for your feedback:)
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