henvick
This sounds like an exciting and suspenseful story. Tessha Marie Gavelan leading a group of teenage heiresses on a Halloween adventure with a haunted villa, a life-or-death game, and hidden truths makes for a thrilling premise. The mix of mystery, danger, and self-discovery really draws me in.
By the way, have you published this story on Amazon or added it to Goodreads yet? I’d love to check it out if it’s available.
henvick
@leejhenx That’s totally understandable, many authors start by editing everything themselves, especially for their first book. Honestly, doing your own revisions can actually help you get closer to your characters and tighten your story in ways an editor might not. If you ever need a second pair of eyes or guidance on structure, pacing, or clarity, I can help you look through things without you needing a big budget. Sometimes even small suggestions can make the whole manuscript feel sharper and more professional. How far along are you in the editing right now?
henvick
@leejhenx Ohh, I understand now. That makes sense, it’s always good to make sure the chapters are fully polished and the word count feels right before putting it out there. How’s the editing going so far? Are you handling it yourself, or did you hire an editor to help you with the revision process?
