@leksaclark
Thank you so much for the follow and for checking out TLM and Second Life! <3
@ xJadesx Hi ! You're welcome, I think you're doing great work. I can't wait to discover the next adventures of Leo and her wives :)
Thank you for the votes and views on my story! How did you Like it? I felt like there was more I could’ve done with the story. Like the fight scenes I definitely feel like I could’ve done more. I feel like there were other chapters that were bad. Please share your thoughts, what would you like to see in Spider girl 2?
@ relivingthenightmare Hi ! You're welcome. I think it's a great story. The plot is very interesting. I don't think you have to do more about the fight scenes but you can describe more like to not move frome a scene to the other so fast. It allows the story to "settle in", I think, in the point of vue of the reader. Like when you begin to read the story, you arrive in a new dimension. It's a journey where Spider Gwen is mixed to feminine soccer players. A bold mixed I must say btw but you make it work so congratulations about that. You can take my advice or not, no offense taken if you don't. Don't Ever stop believing in yourself and what you can do. Feel proud of your accomplishments and enjoy life, you only have one.
thanks for voting on blue river academia, joe you continue to enjoy :)
@ sapphicartemiss it's an amazing story I love it. I will certainly continue to enjoy reading it
Je na sais pas pourquoi mais je pense que tu as lu "Welcome To Midvale High School" de sadiquegirl(nouveau surnom pour toi @DarkkLight9 )
Salut !
Merci d'avoir ajouté mon histoire à une de tes listes !
Les votes me font extrêmement plaisir, j'espère que la suite te plaira ^^
Salut, un grand merci pour tes votes pour mon histoire Atalante ! J’espère qu’elle te plaît malgré son âge ^^
