Hi @lemistery! Thanks for all the feedback on the fanfic "A New Beginning" of the Naruto fandom. I can see the different plotholes the story hold and I'm sorry about that. I'm actually surprise you decide to keep read it on! Thought, I'm glad you did! It's been three years, the story was completed in which I never entirely review to make some changes! I did want to feature the "side characters" a bit more and differently because I thought they needed to be in a story and not just the mains characters like we see in other AU fanfics . I also realized throughout the comments in the last years, the characters are really OC from the fandom which I should have put in the Author Note at the beginning. Thank you for passing time on it.