lemonly4u

If the new chapter is written in a confusing way just tell me y’all 

lemonly4u

Alright y’all the revamp story will come out today I really like the way I wrote this bc it doesn’t feel forced and seems natural and actually has pacing. Please, please, PLEASE let me know if there’s anything I could do better. I’m hoping to have a new chapter out every 1-2 weeks so any comments or criticism would really keep me focused on the story