mendesalive

Hi there! I know these kind of messages are SO annoying and I hate to bother you, but I was hoping you could give my story a read and comment? I saw your comment on one of my favourite stories and thought it was really lovely. My story doesn't have any chapters up at the moment, just a trailer, but as a new writer I'm looking for any feedback I can in any area. It would be really appreciated. Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/665164254-where-were-you-in-the-morning-introduction