It was a tough decision, but I've decided that I'm going to unpublish all parts of If I'm Lucky and start fresh. I really want to focus on my storyline and how I move the plot along, and I think that can best be done by tweaking what I have so far and giving the story a bit of a face lift. I'm hoping to have the first chapter fixed and republished sometime in the next few days. If you're still interested in the story, I'm sorry to do this, but as a writer I feel that to be happy with it, this is what needs to be done.