Hi,ik you haven’t updated in awhile and it’s completely understandable, I think your story has a tone of potential! I really like the story line you have going on and you writing style. I think your a really talented writer. I was wondering if you would like help on the book (sorry if it comes off as rude to ask I really don’t want it to be or come off that way). I was wondering if you would like to have someone to proof read the chapter before you post it and cross check The minor details for spelling,grammar, really anything you would need or want help on. I wouldn’t want to make it sound like I don’t think your capable of writing your own book I do think your more than capable. I’m really interested in the story.Sorry if this is coming off rude or I’m totally out of line.sorry this is long just wanted to put a offer out!