Hey Leoleno,
I'm writing this message with tears in my eyes after having read your masterpiece. It is truly beautiful. The characters; the development of River has been so unpredictable yet plausible. Your story is so very realistic and it touched my heart! Thank you for sharing this with us.
I absolutely loved your book The Maid. I couldn't stop reading it, because it was sooooo good! I love your writing style. I know this sounds bad to put in but would you mind checking out my book? It would mean a lot, but if not that's totally fine! :)
you nailed it. i loved your ending of the story.unlike other stories where you finish then just go to the next story, i had to pause reflect on river's story and i actually feel the story.keep it up