okay chapter TWO will be up soon-ish. Sorry that chapter one isn't as good as i hoped it would be.
Hopefully the story will get better as it goes on. i wasn't really planning for Kara to be at school so soon but it didn't seem right having a death, a meeting at a park, and then a holiday straight after. so i thought, ooh maybe if i make it half term and make it as though it was planned before the death it would make more sense? no. okay then..