ShiroSama735
https://www.wattpad.com/story/371821184?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Debosree18 Can you give a try? * It's not my story
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nightingale989
Like even a slight stiff from his elder brother would make his day. Imagine if Abhyansh was nice to him (I know everyone is so kind with Avi and I should not make a cry about how Avi should be pampered more).
At times Abhyansh would consider him as not only his brother but child (that's how much he loves him) but will be so cold with him. Avi basically sees his elder brother as his idol, so a few words of appreciation or even a basic smile will be enough for him (I know Abhyansh want to be strict. So, his younger brother would be perfect in his job. But don't we all know the cons of strict parenting?).
Lastly, Amrita, the grey character. I know the statement I am going to make will turn several heads and will result in outrage from people but but hear me out okay? (Don't be offended, it's just an art of fiction which we all adore.)
If Isha could forgive her husband for reducing her to a mere slave then can't Amrita be forgiven for indirectly be reason of Bhuvan and her daughter's death, also for (emotionally) cheating her husband.
nightingale989
I love your work author, it's so well detailed that most of the things are imprinted in my head, credit to your writing. Hope you have wonderful writing journey.
P.S. - I highly doubt you would ever read this nonsense but if you did, and any of my blabbering caused you trouble or hurt you then you may delete it. Pardon me.
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I wanted to post the rest of the remaining things last night itself. Unfortunately, Wattpad wasn't allowing to post any other things. Hence the delay.
nightingale989
(Last night I post this on author's board. But it was deleted, maybe be due to technical issue or something. I am currently low at energy, so I am not editing it. If you would like to read it.... You may proceed.)
Aww... thanks buddy.
Well the due credit goes to the author, how meticulously she wrote the chapters. Like it's days and I still remember several details.
Also I somewhere recall how Amar referred to Abhyansh as the "Beast", and still Abhyansh couldn't see the betrayal coming (from his own mother, the same way Amar should)?
Besides I don't know why but I like Amar the most....yes he became my bias(like many of the supporting characters). And I simply want justice for his character. He was so kind (the kind of kind *conditional or not* I aspire to be )
[Like who can not love him? He was such a sweetheart..He deserved more screen-time.]
And Pallavi, she was a darling too, she was so understanding and was with Amar till his last breath, literally and sadly.
Further, we can't forget Ran... he was the first one to impress the Beast...THE BEAST (who can't be impressed after his 2 close people's death.). From the starting of his entry, Abhyansh liked him(as his opponent or whatever he like to call him then). He (Abhyansh) said something like he accepted Ran his brother in law way before he accepted Isha as his wife (or something along the line, I guess).
nightingale989
Rajmata, she was so wise. And according to me she was least explored character. She was a good interpreter. She could even read and understand the cold emotionless Abhyansh, most of the times, even before Isha could in earlier chapters. She was silent most of the times, I wonder what was her coping mechanisms with how there was always one or the other thing going on in the palace.
Pratap, he was verbal and physical abuser for decades and complaining all the time to his mother about his son. He was abuser for years then to create a father figure for Isha, he was all nice and caring character (all in a few months?). I know people changes over years... but it was.... how do I put it, it seemed unnatural to me (maybe because I think he should have a back story or his own small pov).
Then we have Avi. He was a cinnamon roll. But I think Abhyansh should be more emotionally available for him, especially after he (Abhyansh) became nice to Isha.
nightingale989
Thanks for the appreciation.
Do you use insta?
nightingale989
@nightingale989 I don't have snap... and don't know how to use it either. What other options do you suggest?
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lerners1234567890
Hlo guys ..let start the story which will include all the real life incident of a girl..