Lesedi Loré

Hi po!
          Sorry for plugging in. Can I receive feedbacks from you sa story ko po?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/278124252?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=RamJiez&wp_originator=jXrhVaBDqsHnY2MWoQJy8gB%2F95mGjx4luWm9eTZ6TyUPQOguipPJG73LeciOyWS%2F7hugEW7pUrM7M7h3f4j%2BmDxTQgU99kN1uMSx1fsko%2FHkLzDH5fD%2Fh%2Be0k96x%2B%2Fj3

Hi sorry for the shameless plugging. I just want to share my story. I'm a new writer lang po, so feedback and critics are highly appreciated. Hope you can give it a try, thank u so much in advance. Have a nice day ahead!
          
          https://my.w.tt/sjwpxBKIVcb