turtlesailor

hello....first i really like your new book cover, hats down
          second...your story won't load on my phonei don't know what to do!!!

turtlesailor

oh wow, thankyou, i'll look forward to that :-]
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letsdancewithblades

@turtlesailor maybe next friday i will publish the first 10 chapters :-))
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turtlesailor

oh okay, that's alright :-)....do you have a period or maybe a date when you will start posting the 'new version', or is it still too early to say?!
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RazeSilvenia879

hello i really like your story, actually it was the kind of story i'm looking for, just keep it up

RazeSilvenia879

Well don't be! The story was actually good for an amateur like you.
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letsdancewithblades

@RazeSilvenia879 yep, so i'm afraid i made so many mistakes
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RazeSilvenia879

is it your first story?
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