The cover itself has me wanting this book on my shelf, plus the authors shift between first and third person voice is working reasonably. Check it out for yourself
https://www.wattpad.com/story/281805738
1. It's a dystopian fic
2. It sets the mood from the get-go
3. If this were a hardcopy, I'd have it on my shelf
4. It's got potential written all over it
5. It's on my board. So you HAVE to read it
https://www.wattpad.com/story/289858761
its a mystery with 54 for chapters on the block, need i say more?
btw, there's a trailer that certainly sets the tone
https://www.wattpad.com/story/277173269