leukemiona

This is a new story that I'm writing and I hope it catch your eye. I'm really new at this and want to get your feedback. It's the first page and I want to know if it draws you in. Please comment and help me out. Thanks. https://www.wattpad.com/story/145149885

How was your weekend? 
          
          

I'm writing a new poetry book called "All Mind." Check out the first poem (two parts) called Fucked Up. I accidentally deleted the first poem "Sweet Revenge" and can't get it back because I'm writing these poems off the top of my head.

Hello everyone!! I've been away for a while but I'm back. I have a lot of stories in mind and I'm ready to share them with you. 
          
          Be prepared to read. 

Hey guys. I'm really looking to write a book that attracts readers. I have not received feedback yet on the chapters I've written so far, so I'm not sure which way to go. I see a lot of interesting books on here and all the feedback received. I need some input on what direction I need to go in. Let me know. Love to know what you all think.

Hello to all. I want to give a s/o to all my new followers @jasminemoore784 @preddiegurl @timbobang @taytianie_no_ali @0105897ab @strom_brown @sinfulshayy @melaninmonroe0 @markkash @tr3sur3 @twixxywalker. Thank you all so much. What's been up?

Good morning to all!!! It's been a very long time since I've been on but I'm here to stay this time. Have to get this story completed. First and foremost, let me give a big s/o to all my new followers @jalhamichelle @naeyonce @royalforeign_ @spoiledmani @denishasulton @kecithomas @qveenrose @rosethug @keepcalm_kia @howboutnaa @bresha18 @2pearlss @nookiedee @allmemari @giagia9629 @lovely8284 @qveen_taylorrr. Thank you all so very much and I mean that from the bottom of my heart. 
          
          Stay blessed.

It's been a while since I've stopped by to say hello...sorry. I want to give a big s/o to those who have started following. 
          
          Hope to get some feedback from each of you, I need the inspiration. Have a blessed one. 

S/O to my new follower@obeyjj!!!

It's a beautiful morning & we're in it. I wanna give a s/o to my new followers @martionna_bestie, @xoxoasia_, @arieethewriter and @poetic_yai. Thank you all so very much. Hope you read what I've written so far and give me some feed back. 
          
          I'm going to work on my story a little more today. Thank you all for your patience. Appreciate ya'