Hello. I want to make request for your Resurrection fanfic.
It seems you wasted Mark and his family in final fight. Seriously, you outright delete all of them right in their intervention, to make Lewis shine? It is truly bad writing, per se.
I hope you can fix that final fight, making Mark and his family help Lewis and Hiroki to fight Andrew and henchmen, and remove any unecessary, cringe-ass music power-up and "power of friendship" thingy. Give Mark and family more screentime and make them formidable ally and new family for Lewis.
Sorry for the rant. Make sense looking at some...bad writing and neglect of new, potential character like Mark and his family.
