lexiexi23

@ThaliahThomas 
          	So do I I have been #1 fan since day 1 of his career. And btw love your profile pic.

lexiexi23

I'm so sorry I deleted my book The Story Of April Fosters but I wasn't having much fun writing it and not many people were reading it so I deleted it. I am starting to write a new book called Do I Like Him?Would you read it based on the title? Make comments! It's going to be a fanfiction so who should it be about? Comment and I will try to get back to you. Have a wonderful night!!!

VintageCanvas

I think that overall, your story is pretty good! You seem to have a great general idea of your plot and idea which is a good start. The only thing I would work on, is the spacing in terms of paragraphs and changing numbers like 10 to "ten."
          
          Good luck kind person xx