lhuskies

I know I have to rewrite my first chapter but honestly I'll leave it there for a while so you can see my rookie years or better yet my improvements. I need you to stop being harsh about the first chapter because frankly I am tired of getting only comments in that one chapter and they're not being very nice ... thanks 

lhuskies

I know I have to rewrite my first chapter but honestly I'll leave it there for a while so you can see my rookie years or better yet my improvements. I need you to stop being harsh about the first chapter because frankly I am tired of getting only comments in that one chapter and they're not being very nice ... thanks