kayla_bia

Hey mama 
          
          Kayla here just giving you couple pointers. Separate the sentences wordy stuff people won’t read
          
          The plot…you have to hook the readers beforehand so the first chapter should have their attention. You need an attention grabber it’s okay you’re new at it
          
          In due time you’ll get it but I think you should unpublished the book and edit and repost if you need pointers and help as you go along text me on instagram 
          
          Duhhh.itzz_.slim

liayhdidthat

@kayla_bia okay then thank you for your feedback
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