Miss_Nightshade12
I have just finished your book, the story line is great but it could use some fix ups. Firstly the grammar needs a lot more attention and secondly the story escalated too fast, maybe add extra information and thirdly it gets confusing here and there. If u just adjust these few things it would be a whole lot better, then maybe you can repost the book here since u removed it.
lifestoryinausername
Thank you for the advice but writing isn't really my thing so I just deleted the books
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