lifesucksthenudie

lol fine by me!

@lifesucksthenudie. At the Improve Your Writing club you can find editors and critics. A lot of them are very good I believe :)

@MusicAndDreams. Do you know how I can find one. I think it will help me too

Hey, I think you should get someone to edit your story, there are a few mistakes and it draws attention away from the actually story (at least for me it did). I might be able to help with the spelling mistakes, if you want, but I would look for a editor to make your story better. :)
          
          ~M.A.D

Thanks for the comments. I guess I'll have to try and out detail to make the characters understandable. 
          Thanks everyone:)

Thanks for the comments. I guess I'd have try and put detail to make them understandable.
          Thanks everyone