@lightd_th Regarding Celian, I just finished the chapters, and I can’t wait for more. I can’t see him forgiving anyone in the family besides Grafiya—at most, he seems to get along well with her. And that’s how the work stands... it explores much more adult and profound themes. I would love to see Celian and Grafiya’s relationship deepen, even in a more intimate way. At least the atmosphere seems to be developing in that direction, since she doesn’t participate in Sirzechs’s intimate moments, and their relationship would certainly involve a cold and dominant Celian, as Grafiya herself said—that she would like to be passive. That would represent well what demons are, and her promiscuity seems to set the tone you are aiming for in this story.
After all, they are demons, and since he is her son, that wouldn’t even be seen as betrayal. I can even imagine Ravel and Rias placing him in a throuple, lol. Now, regarding power, the potential is infinite. 90% of DxD fanfiction doesn’t go beyond the peace agreement arc.
Regarding other fanfics, I would love Bleach crossover stories—like Bleach and DxD existing in the same world. I’ve seen a proposal like that before, but it was poorly executed, obviously leaning toward adult content in an “older otaku” style. Silly stories about the power of friendship, for example, rarely appeal to me. However, Celian’s work has infinite potential; it even includes a war between worlds in the light novel, which opens up a wide range of possibilities for connections between different worlds. DxD, in general, simply has enough potential to be written about for a lifetime, hahaha.
Since Celian’s story is still in its early stages and has focused more on his relationships, that’s all I can offer for now. This is constructive criticism for the moment; as the story progresses, I’ll provide more. I hope this was helpful in some way.
A father-daughter relationship WHEN SHE GROWS UP I accept. Sorry, with works of demons, my perverted side got out
