Khushimalik897

https://www.wattpad.com/story/410413622?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SNyxMalik
          would you like to try my story also , I will be grateful towards you if you read and vote my story. As my story includes a HACKED prank marriage but it becomes a real marriage.

Khushimalik897

@SNyxMalik Awww stop, this made me so happy 
            
            And please don’t think you sounded like a villain at all — I actually love when readers tell me honestly what they feel. That’s how I can improve the story.
            
            Thank you so much for giving it an 8/10 and especially pointing out Chapter 3. I’m definitely going to work on making it stronger.
            
            Readers like you genuinely help me grow as a writer, so thank you for helping me improve Hacked Hearts 
            
            And please keep criticizing whenever you feel something is missing… I’ll take it as help, not hate ✨
            Thank you
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likhitha1408

@SNyxMalik it's good, you have really improve the style of writing author I appreciate that!!
            Overall I give 8 out of 10 still there is a scope for improvement . I feel chapter 3 has something missing. Other wise well and good. Don't take me villian part for criticising the story, well I am not  just pointed out what I felt so that the story of urs would go well in future.
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Khushimalik897

@SNyxMalik Sorry for making you uncomfortable. But Today I changed my story script Would you like to tell me how it is . I would be grateful towards you . Thanks for reading my story and giving me an honest review about the story. Thank you dear reader you are my first reader who commented on my story.
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