lil-miss-readderr

I’m like… writing two things at once 
          	Literally feels like whiplash lol
          	But I’m excited to say I’m also working on a Severus x OC fanfic! It’s been hogging my attention tho cause I see the potential, meanwhile my Spock x OC is mostly untouched … don’t worry tho I will finish it 

lil-miss-readderr

Dude I just realized I’ve said I was working on a Severus x OC like some years back lol I’m so done 
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lil-miss-readderr

I’m like… writing two things at once 
          Literally feels like whiplash lol
          But I’m excited to say I’m also working on a Severus x OC fanfic! It’s been hogging my attention tho cause I see the potential, meanwhile my Spock x OC is mostly untouched … don’t worry tho I will finish it 

lil-miss-readderr

Dude I just realized I’ve said I was working on a Severus x OC like some years back lol I’m so done 
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dovakiin-demigodess

I just finished reading your book and it is amazing and I wish you can continue to write this story but the wording at this beginning was slightly choppy just something a little revision can fix, but love what you’ve done with the slow burn and the miscommunication when it came to their feelings to each other, as well as the building of your oc and her background.

lil-miss-readderr

Thanks so much!! So the first chapter could use some revision, is there any specific instance or just in general?? 
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lil-miss-readderr

Ya know what’s the worst?? Your writing something in a specific POV but then you slowly start to write in another POV. Like did I forget?? Why would I do that?? Like dang that sucks now I got to rewrite stuff or else it’s not gonna make since 
          Anybody else do this? Or is it just me trippin

dovakiin-demigodess

Not just you friend 
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