lil_bit_salaleo

in “watch me” there’re a lot of time crossing, and it’s not some kind of mistake. 
          	
          	Sam can’t orientate in time, and all events happened both in present, past, future. 
          	
          	he decided that some events already happened in past, but it’s just plot of his imagination. 
          	
          	decreased attention and disorientation - loss of orientation in time, space, self!

Fan_Fannnnn

really love you writing style can’t wait to see next chapter 
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lil_bit_salaleo

in “watch me” there’re a lot of time crossing, and it’s not some kind of mistake. 
          
          Sam can’t orientate in time, and all events happened both in present, past, future. 
          
          he decided that some events already happened in past, but it’s just plot of his imagination. 
          
          decreased attention and disorientation - loss of orientation in time, space, self!

Fan_Fannnnn

really love you writing style can’t wait to see next chapter 
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lil_bit_salaleo

okay, should I post something here? 
          
          “watch me” is my first work, full of mistakes and plot errors! anyway, I like my style of writing, it’s more prosaic, where words diving into your mind slowly touching bottom through your individual imagination. 
          if u still like it and waiting for the next plot development, you’ll be probably obsessed with each word, 
          let’s make our love alive